just before Old Sammy’s Bridge
a judge
pulled over on the side of the road
swims
in the light of state-trooper red and blues
down by the lake
a few clicks away
a night bird calling
for all the broken spirits to gather round
a question answers a question
what’s the story
sir
do you know who i am
The Secret Keeper’s Weekly Writing Challenge #61
| Broke | Judge | Story | Bridge | Lake |
This is damn good. Atmospheric. It reminds me of John Gardner, in all the right ways.
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Thanks…Gardner is quite the compliment. 🙂
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Meant to be. 🙂
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its awesome…
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Thanks 🙂
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Makes me wonder and think.
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🙂
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I think this is one of your best. Nothing extra, and hits with a good hard punch.
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thanks much…glad to hear the ending has a punch…i was a little leery of it.
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No, I think it’s perfect.
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🙂 🙂
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